गजल - बौ'लाउन मजा हुन्छ,पागल भएर हेर। चिन्नलाई धरती यो,बादल भएर हेर।

गजल

बौ'लाउन मजा हुन्छ,पागल भएर हेर।

चिन्नलाई धरती यो,बादल भएर हेर।

पुछ्नलाई सजिलैछ,झरिहाले आसुँ कतै,

आँखैनेर बसी हेर,गाजल भएर हेर।

आवाज होला बेसुरा,बजाएर सुनेपछी,

खरी हाले भईहाल्छ,मादल भएर हेर।

अलिअलि खोक्रो मान्छे,अलिअलि भरी,

घुनलागेपनी साथी ,चामल भएर हेर।

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ढोँगी आज, बाबा भयो,पत्याउने मान्छे कस्ता। तातो तेल,सत्य माथि,खत्याउने मान्छे कस्ता। गजल

गजल

ढोँगी आज, बाबा भयो,पत्याउने मान्छे कस्ता।

तातो तेल,सत्य माथि,खत्याउने मान्छे कस्ता।

गाढ्या लास, बिउँताउने,बन्दुकैले मन्त्र हानी,

राजा द्यौता,बुद्ध दैत्य,लत्याउने मान्छे कस्ता।

नबस है,भनेकै हो,त्यसमाथि सियो छ नि,

खेलै भयो,कुर्सी त्यही,हत्याउने मान्छे कस्ता।

डराएको,छैन सहीद, मरेकालाई मार्ने को छ?

तिनैलाई,घाँटी थिची,अँत्याउने मान्छे कस्ता।

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गजल - अरुनिम्ति रुन पाए, जाती हुन्थ्यो कति। घाऊ तिनै धुन पाए, जाती हुन्थ्यो कति

गजल

अरुनिम्ति रुन पाए, जाती हुन्थ्यो कति।

घाऊ तिनै धुन पाए, जाती हुन्थ्यो कति।

हिरामोती बहुमुल्य,फलामैको भाउ छैन,

पित्तलैमा सुन पाए, जाती हुन्थ्यो कति।

फूल पात,भन्या त्यस्तै,छुने भए अति,

जरा पनि,छुन पाए,जाती हुन्थ्यो कति।

सद्धे सबै अलिअलि,पागल आलिअलि,

मान्छेचाहिँ हुन पाए जाती हुन्थ्यो कति

अरुनिम्ति,रुन पाए,जाती हुन्थ्यो कती।

घाऊ तिनै धुन पाए, जाती हुन्थ्यो कति।

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एउटा मनोचिकित्सक हुने लक्ष्य लिएको छु। समाजबाट अपहेलित ति तथाकथित 'मानसिक रोगी' सुन्दर मान्छेहरुप्रती भावपूर्ण समर्पण।तिनिहरु जो मेरो निम्ती कविता,गीत, गजल जत्तिकै सुन्दर छन।

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xYPIKeKRzqg

गजल भक्तको छ ठुलै लाम,दरबारमा हजुर। रमाउने तिनै बन्दुक,तरबारमा हजुर।

गजल

भक्तको छ ठुलै लाम,दरबारमा हजुर।

रमाउने तिनै बन्दुक,तरबारमा हजुर।

जिउँदा मात्रै होइनन,सहिद पनि बोल्छन,

सोझ्याऊन दुनो आफ्नै,सरकारमा हजुर।

आफ्नाको लौ जिब्रो काटी,पोशण पराइको ,

चलाऊने देश भजन, करबारमा हजुर।

भ्यागुता पो निक्लियो,माछो लोकतन्त्र आज,

षड्यन्त्र छ,त्यही मार्ने,घरबारमा हजुर।

भक्तको छ ठुलै लाम,दरबारमा हजुर।

रमाउने तिनै बन्दुक,तरबारमा हजुर।

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गजल- डम्फु मात्रै भाई,चारा गजब लाग्छ। आफु सङ्गै आज,सारा गजब लाग्छ।

गजल

डम्फु मात्रै भाई,चारा गजब लाग्छ।

आफु सङ्गै आज,सारा गजब लाग्छ।

हेर्दा खेरी सुधो,मान्छे हजुर लाग्छ,

भित्रभित्रै हुन्छ, दार्हा गजब लाग्छ।

उज्यालो छ जुन,आफ्नै प्रकाश छैन,

हुन्छ त्यही पर,तारा गजब लाग्छ।

एउटा हात छुरी,हात परेवा अर्को,

शान्ति हुनु पर्‍यो,नारा गजब लाग्छ।

कोही मर्छ भोकै,कोही खाएर धेरै,

संसारै छ यस्तै,पारा गजब लाग्छ।

देउता को हुन्छ यहाँ,दैत्य को हुन्छ,

मान्छे आँफै मान्छे,मारा गजब लाग्छ।

नाम सुन्दा भाई,चारा गजब लाग्छ।

आफु सङ्गै आज,सारा गजब लाग्छ।

माथि पुग्छ अझै,जो छ पहिले माथि,

भन्नलाई सर्ब, हारा गजब लाग्छ।

उज्यालो छ जुन,आफ्नै प्रकाश छैन,

हुन्छ त्यही पर,तारा गजब लाग्छ।

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नुवाकोट नेपाल

गजल सम्झिएर आँफैलाई, रोउँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो। यादलाई तस्बिरै थ्यो,छोउँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो।.............

गजल

सम्झिएर आँफैलाई, रोउँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो।

यादलाई तस्बिरै थ्यो,छोउँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो।

सङ्खा धेरै आँफैमाथि, छामी हेँरे अनि,

एनामाचैँ अर्कै मान्छे,को हुँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो।

मैलिएको मनै हो कि,मस्तिस्क यो मेरो,

सोचेजती कुरा सबै,धोउँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो।

लेख्या रै'छ चिन्नलाई,मान्छे आँफैभित्र,

मायापनि लाग्यो पछी,जो हुँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो।

सम्झिएर आँफैलाई, रोउँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो।

यादलाई तस्बिरै छ, छोउँ जस्तो लाग्थ्यो।

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superhero

Here we have,

Another new man,

Of a different kind,

Half dead half alive.

Half sane, half insane.

Half seen, half blind

Unlike all those fakes,

Mistakes he makes,

From them he learns,

No more weapons,

Humanity at stake,

he shall save.

Correct that mistake.

A new superhero.

World at crime,

He will make fine.

Save this timeline.

All those in the chains.

Set them all free.

do believe ,do agree.

He doesn't crawl,

Not a spiderman.

He doesn't fight,

Not a batman.

He doesn’t fly,

Not a superman.

He doesn't kill.

Not an ironman.

He doesn't shoot,

Not a hitman.

He thinks.

He speaks.

World be at peace,

A moment of bliss.

Of a different kind,

Half dead, half alive.

Half sane, half insane.

Half visible, half blind

Mistakes he makes,

From them he learns,

No more weapons,

Humanity at stake,

he shall save.

Just the last chance,

To the ultimate superhero,

The new man-man.

Suresh Jyotipunja

nuwakot nepal

now,

jipmer,pondicherry

गजल

गजल

युद्धमा बन्दुक बोक्ने,राजा हुन्छ यहाँ।

मैदान ईराक,काबुल, गाजा हुन्छ यहाँ।

नियम हो प्रकृतिमा,अन्याय निर्धामाथि,

कमै मात्र बलियोचाँही,खाजा हुन्छ यहाँ।

छैन गीत मान्छेको, गाउने अर्कै कुरा,

बारूद तोप गोली,आज, बाजा हुन्छ यहाँ।

कहाँतीर लागे कुन्नी,मान्छेजस्ता जन्तु?

रगतैमा डुब्या खबर, ताजा हुन्छ यहाँ।

युद्धमा बन्दुक बोक्ने,राजा हुन्छ यहाँ।

मैदान ईराक,काबुल, गाजा हुन्छ यहाँ।

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The Doctor and The Patient

Doc,
I have so much to tell
h've been living in hell
All bad I can spell
But no good to smell
That I feel I am insane
Then he cries and says-
Help me doc please
I think for so long
It makes no sense
What is this life song?


Don't you cry dear,
I am so close, so near,
I will make it all clear.
You will no more fear.
Then doc cries and says-
I was living in hell.
I had so much to tell .
All bad I could smell.
And no good to spell.
I was the same, brother.
We look like each other.

I felt the same,
That I was insane.
But it made sense,
I got my life song.
So shall you brother
We are close, so near ,
We will make it all clear.
We will no more fear.
Then they hug and say-
We will sing together.
We will sing for each other
We are not insane.
We are the gifted.
We are the intelligent.

SURESH JYOTIPUNJA

NEPAL

The Story Inside..........

' Psychiatrists are always shown dead in ghost movies. They will try to save the so callled possessed character as mentally ill patients but end up getting killed. They don't even have right to live in movies. A dead psychiatrist is used to glorify the power of the demon...But there shall come time in the history of medicine when ,psychiatrists will be superheroes.'..... The Story Inside -Suresh Jyotipunja......

गजल

हिजो राती हेरेँ,जुनरानीलाई।

आँखाभित्रै बेरेँ,जुनरानीलाई।

तारा भई आउ,भनेपछी उस्ले,

माथि गयी टेरें,जुनरानीलाई।

लाग्यो डर धेरै,निभे के होला?

बादलुमै घेरेँ,जुनरानीलाई।

पुरा पनि राम्री,आधा अझ धेरै,

कतिचोटि फेरेँ,जुनरानीलाई।

चमकै आखिर,भ्रम रै'छ साथी,

कस्को भनी केरेँ,जुनरानीलाई।

हिजो राती हेरेँ,जुनरानीलाई।

आँखाभित्रै बेरेँ,जुनरानीलाई।

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सबै सद्धे हुनेछन। सबै बुद्ध हुनेछन।

एउटा एस्तो दिन आउनेछ,
संसार दुई समुहमा बिभक्त हुनेछ।
एउटा समुह सद्धेहरुको,
अरुको समुह बौलाहाहरुको।
तर यहाँ हिजका तथाकथीत सद्धेहरु,
ति युद्धखोरहरु बौलाइसकेका हुनेछन।
तथाकथित शान्तिप्रेमी बौलाहाहरु,
सद्धे भएका हुनेछन,
हिजका बौलाहाहरु जो केही बोलेनन,
मात्रै रोइरहे,मात्रै हाँसिरहे।
वा बोल्न नजाने जस्तो गरेर बसे,
तर हिजका सद्धेहरु जो बोलेनन मात्र,
हतियार उठाए,काटे मारे पनि
मारेर हासे पनि,गोही आसुँ चुहाये पनि.

हिजका बौलाहाहहरु अनि बोल्नेछन,
बोल्नेमात्रै छैनन,
कलम बोक्ने छन,
कलम मात्रै बोक्ने होइन,
लेखन थाल्ने छन
अनगिन्ती उनिहरुका कथाहरु
ति कथाहरु कविता बन्नेछन
कविताहरु गीत बन्ने छन,
गजल बन्ने छन,
अनि,
आजका सद्धेहरु,
बाजागाँजा बजाएर,
एकै स्वरमा गाउन थालनेछन,
नाच्न थाल्नेछन,
ति हिजो बौलाहा ठहरिएका,
आजका बुद्धहरु।

हिजोका सद्धेहरु हिजोजस्तै,
हातमा तरबार, खुँडा,खुकुरी नचाएर,
एके फोर्टी सेवेन,एम सिक्स्टिन खेलाएर,
युद्ध जहाजहरु उडाउदै,
बिनासक अनुबमहरु तयार गर्दै।
असन्ख्य छेप्यास्त्रहरु सद्धेतर्फ फर्काएर ,
ती हिजोका सद्धे,आजका गिद्धहरुले
युद्धको उद्घोश गर्नेछन ।

हिजोका बौलाहाहरु,
आजका सद्धेहरु, आजका तिनै बुद्धहरु,
गाउँदै जानेछन ती प्रथनाहरु
लाहाहरुको काप्न थाल्नेछन
स्वत: हतियार भुइमा राख्नेछन
ति तथाकथिक हिजका बौलाहाहरुको,
अगाडि नतमस्तक हुनेछन.
ति तरबार खुँडा, खुकुरी,
बन्दुक छेप्यास्त्र,अनुबमहरु
स्वत:उनिहरु आँफैले ध्वस्त पार्ने छन।
अनी उनिहरु सद्धेका कथाहरु,
पढ्न थालनेछन.
गीत गाउन थालनेछन,
आफ्न कथाहरु लेख्न थालने छन,
कथालाई कबिता बनाउने छन,
त्यो कबितालाई गीत ,
गजल बनाउदै
गाउन थालनेछन
हिजोका बौलाहाहरुसँग मिलेर
हो,
ती हिजोका तथाकथित सद्धेहरु,
आज बौला'एकाहरु,
फेरी सद्धे हुनेछन्।
सबै सद्धे हुनेछन।
सबै बुद्ध हुनेछन।


सुरेश ज्योतिपुञ्ज

जिप्मेर मेडिकल कलेज
पन्डिचेरी,भारत

The story Inside-Suresh Jyotipunja...........

The Silent Buddha

The happening

Apart

The doctor and the patient

The disease

The kid

The story Inside

Pleasure

Sigmund Freud and the guinea pigs

Sanity and insanity

Neurobiology of human emotions

War and Peace

The magic

Enlightment

देउता छैन कोही यहाँ,दैत्य कोही छैन

देउता छैन कोही यहाँ,दैत्य कोही छैन

देउता छैन कोही यहाँ, दैत्य कोही छैन।
बिरामी हुन सबै आज, बैद्द कोही छैन।

लेख्यौ कती आँफैभित्र,वाचन पनि भयौ
कविता सब हामी साथी,गध्य कोही छैन।

अलिअलि काला सबै,अलिअलि सेता सबै,
सेतो-कालो मात्रै हामी,मध्य कोही छैन।

बौलाउनु निको हुन्छ, मर्नु भन्दा भन्थे,
आफुलाई नै सोधी हेर्नु,सद्धे कोही छैन।

देउता छैन कोही यहाँ, दैत्य कोही छैन।
बिरामी हुन सबै आज, बैद्द कोही छैन।


'सुरेश ज्योतिपुञ्ज'

यस्लाई गजल नभनेर गजल शैलीको कविता भन्नुपर्ला।

The patient and The Doctor

'The concept of a doctor and a patient is valid only for that particular clinical setting......Beyond clinics,the story may be entirely different...The doctor may be a patient and the patient, a doctor......For every doctor has a patient inside and the patient a doctor inside.Its just a matter of time and place what predomiantes '.. from The patient and The Doctor' from The Story Inside......

The Story Inside

'I lived for a story and the story lived for me,its called The Story Inside.......'

let us save ourselves and we shall save the world.........

These big conflits in the world are actually the products of bigger conflicts in human mind.The conflicts being the result of sense of insecurity regarding their existence and these world conflicts again create other conflicts in human mind..This compels mankind to go into wars with each other to gain confidence for survival as Darwin has discussed.This is just a vicious cycle that would continue until and unless intervention is done at level of human mind or else the humanity is at threat... and when we actually say that that god shall hail from heaven to save mankind,we are actually saying that we are the ones who should save mankind..It can be explained on the background of defence mechanism theories discussed by Sigmund Fred.One of them is projection- which says- You see yourself in the others...Think about all these superhero movies...These are all result of 'projection',a defence mechanism used by human mind, when actually we all are superheroes irrespective of intelligence,let us be sane or insane,,,,we are creating these fantasy characters to express our repressed responsibilties .So there is no point in waiting for that ultimate angel who shall save the world,let us save ourselves and we shall save the world.........

'The Story Inside'...A novel by Suresh Jyotipunja................

'It shall begin again from the very place it actually began for it has no end,this story called 'The Story Inside'...A novel by Suresh Jyotipunja................

Sigmund Freud and the Guinea pig

'If I ever met Sigmund Freud,i would ask,-Mr Freud,I was a guinea pig wasn't I,a guinea pig of your experiment??? And he would say-Yeah you are,all are..Thank god my experiment with you succeeded. You should be proud that you were part of my successful experiment'------From the chapter Sigmund Freud and the Guinea pig----'The story Inside'-----a Novel by Suresh Jyotipunja....

गजल बोल्न पाउनु पर्छ साथी,बोलाइको कुरा न हो। शब्द गहिरो कती हुन्छ,रोजाइको कुरा न हो।

गजल

बोल्न पाउनु पर्छ साथी,बोलाइको कुरा न हो।
शब्द गहिरो कती हुन्छ,रोजाइको कुरा न हो।

देउतै लाग्ने मान्छे पनि,दैत्य हुन सक्छ पछी,
कालो कस्तो,सेतो कस्तो,सोचाइको कुरा न हो।

गुमाउनेले पाउने कती,पाउनेले गुमाउने कती,
हुँदा आखिर भागवन्डा,मोलाइको कुरा न हो।

नयाँ हजुर राजा हुन्छ, छैन रैती बद्लिएको,
त्यही स्रिपेच कस्को हुने,ढोगाइको कुरा न हो।

जाग्ने पालो बौलाहाको, सद्धेहरु बौलाए'सी,
कस्को बिचार ठुलो आज,भोगाइको कुरा न हो।

बोल्न पाउनु पर्छ साथी,बोलाइको कुरा न हो।
शब्द गहिरो कती हुन्छ,रोजाइको कुरा न हो।



सुरेश ज्योतिपुञ्ज


नुवाकोट नेपाल


मेरा गजलगुरु जसले हरेक पल्टको भेटमा माया गरेर भन्नुभयो-'जतिसुक्यो नियम पूर्वक लेखेपनी, बिचार को लागि लेख्न कहिले नबिर्सिनु।बिचार बिना गजल कहिले पुरा हुँदैन।'त्यसो भनेर माया गर्दै हातमा ज्योतिपुञ्जलाई आफ्नो गजल सङ्रह 'समयलाई सलाम' थमाइदिने यि गुरुलाई यो गजल समर्पित गर्न चाहन्छु। ....आज सम्झिये है ..गुरुर्दक्षिना मेरो।लौ स्विकार्नुस्

Membership of World Poet's Society PART 3

Membership of World Poet's Society

Official Membersip of World Poet's Society

The Palm Readers- This thin line between Sanity and insanity.

And there she read,

Held in her little hands,mine,

Trying to figure out,

Those beautiful time lines.

Some so thick some so thin,

Some so blur, some so clear.

After reading for so long.

As if she understood,

She said.

'Dear,I can read read them all

These time lines say-

That You will be a star

Your future is so bright

I will bee yours and you mine

Forever and forever.

'But,

Things aren't that easY,

You will have to work hard

And the world is yours.

Everything will be so fine.'

Stars do work hard,don't they?

Everbody do,don't they?

I asked.

'For they have to shine bright

For the heat and eternal light

And,

I took those little hands in mine

Trying to figure out her time line

As if they were mine

But I didn't have this gift

Gift to read those lines

And

I said,

'Honey,I am so sorry

Nothing I can understand

Though I can see them so clear.

'Its all right',she said.

And there was this time,

When I whispered into her ear-

'Honey,u didn't mean it,did you?

When you said you would be mine.

When you said I could be a star.

That my future is so bright.

But a secret to say as I part.

you missed those lines dear.

Lines so thin but so clear

One of them between

Sanity and insanity.

I knew it for so long,

The rhythm and rhyme of life song.

For there was this little kid-

Who held my little hands in his

And said-

'Brother, I am so pleased

I can read these time lines.

Not only read, feel them so near.

All of them, all so clear.

Brother,

I can read read them all

These time lines say-

That You will be a star

Your future is so bright

Your future is so full of light

But,

Things aren't that easY,

You will have to work more.

And the world is yours.

Everything will be so fine.

I am yours and you are mine.

Forever and forever.

You will have to work hard.

And Stars work hard,don't they?

Everbody does,don't they?

He asked.

He read and then left,

Whispered into my ear and said

Oh brother,

I am so sorry.

I didn't tell about those darkest lines.

Darkest of the darks, so clear

We will no more be together.

We shall be so close, still so apart.

But I did mean it when I said

That you are a star.

And there are these other stars

Trying to shine so bright but can't

But Don’t have that light

Time for their salvation brother

Help them shine so bright

Shine bright just like you

And its you, you to do that

And he was gone.

But got into my mind.

Forever and forever.

She was not there

she never got into my mind

He says again,again and again

the voice deep down my head.

Remember brother, remember.

You have this unique time line.

Time line so thin but still so clear.

Which shall take you between,

Sanity and insanity

And remember forever,

You have to shine so bright.

That you have to save yourself

to save those other lights

Help them shine so bright.

Shine bright just like you.

That's how I know,

Its not a curse, but a pride

Very few in the world have

This thin line between

Sanity and insanity.

Suresh Jyotipunja